Against all odds... you make me believe.
I still remember the first time I saw you
I met you
I touched you, it was beautiful.
Yet I'd die before I reveal to you
What you do to me. I don't want to be vunerable,
I'm not captureable. I'm not able
To love-- I thought... but you've swayed me against all odds
And made me believe.
It doesn't take much to annoy me
But it'll take a lot of work to love me
Many have said "I love you" to me,
But I've only returned the phrase once.
But this once, this twice, this three times I've repeated to you
I love you; and I know I do.
You have made me believe.
You be patient with me, and I'll give unto you
Whatever you ask of me I will to do.
Tell me what makes you smile, I want to make you proud
That I am your girl, and you be my cloud.
I want to float on you and rain our love
To pass on to others, through kisses and hugs
Our children and their children will sprout out of passion
And you give to me, I'll take what you're passin
I vow never to hurt you, you vow your faithfulness to me
Through it all, my dear love you have made me believe.

wow nice poem thats was lovely who made yo ubelieve

Very moving monique27
Against all odds, You make me believe...

Thank you for sharing with us...

Again ..very well done monique..WILL

Believe it or not I actually met this guy online (not this site,
somewhere else). He's in the NAVY and I have such strong feelings for
him. I'm afraid to lose him and its weird cuz I never open up so easily
and fall so quickly. But he's like my match. I can't wait til he comes
home... til then TMOBILE better stay in business or I'mma act a fool!

But I'm glad you like the poem ya'll... its real

Ohhh girl the words from the heart.
No sweetier music to hear when two are apart.
Sure he will keep you on that cloud
For he will be very very proud.
To have and you and all your love.
That was sent to him from god above.


Best wishes in yer journey
in love & life.