Topic: Careful what you ask for!
Stealthfire71's photo
Sat 02/01/14 06:22 AM
New to the area here in Florida, been here a short couple of years, career has kept me busy but thought it might be time to put myself out there and try the dating scene, new to this site and feedback would be appreciated! Good luck to all in finding what you're searching for! And thanks in advance for opinions...good or bad!

Stealthfire71's photo
Sat 02/01/14 10:38 AM
Crickets????

soufiehere's photo
Sat 02/01/14 01:03 PM
Frogs :-)

Pleasant profile, can't complain.
Best of luck :-)

Stealthfire71's photo
Sat 02/01/14 01:39 PM
Thank you Soufiehere! You as well!

PacificStar48's photo
Sat 02/01/14 04:02 PM
Edited by PacificStar48 on Sat 02/01/14 04:03 PM
This is a pretty good profile. Well above the norm.

I would make a few tweaks.

Get a little more catchy headline. Hi is ok just not memorable.

Pic's are good. Lighting in a couple are dark but bigger boys bigger toys. No sideways pics it looks goofy. Maybe one less look alike head shot and you doing something Dad like inside the house. A picture of you doing something fun you could share on a date would be a BIG plus.

Leave out the fourth sentence. Breaks your other wise positive vibe.

Your sons of course are "your world" but nothing tells a potential relationship they will always be a second class citizen in your family as this statement and I doubt that is your goal. Parental brag is fine; example "Have two awesome sons being a full time Dad is so great." is inviting with out making you sound like you are looking for a free maid. Another parent of quality single will see that as encouragement to step up and act accordingly.

Good luck. Welcome to Mingle.

Stealthfire71's photo
Sat 02/01/14 05:13 PM
Thank you PacificStar48, I humbly appreciate the feedback!