Topic: The Love I Seek. A Random Muse.
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Sat 01/11/14 03:57 PM
My dearest, my Love thou hath my Heart Stole;
Thus unto you I giveth it whole.
The charm of your words hath swept my mind clean;
No worries shall hold your place whilst I dream.

For this I must thank your warm loving kind.
You giveth me life and alloweth to shine;
A heart once cased in cold hardened stone.
You allowed it to beat and welcomed me home.

It is your arms I seek relentlessly by day;
with dreams in the night at your side I may lay.
In the morning awake my dream comes to end;
Awaking to dream at your side again.

If you still trek this world far or near;
My love I do seek your presence to share.
Allow me to speak my heart and to bare;
All that I love and relinquish our fear.

Whence time doth come our paths may so cross;
I should hope that you welcome my dreams and my hopes.
On that fair day we just may receive;
The blessings of love to hold and believe.

Greg812003's photo
Sat 01/11/14 04:14 PM
I must apologize I do not write Poetry all too often anymore and am a wee bit rusty to say the least let alone do I usually share it with the masses. I generally save it for my loved one. So go easy on me guys but please do let me know what you think. I welcome criticism and ideas.

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Mon 01/13/14 06:16 PM
Loved this~ flowerforyou

loveeey's photo
Mon 01/13/14 07:28 PM
Great poem, I really like it.:heart:

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Mon 01/13/14 08:25 PM
flowers drinker flowers

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Thu 01/16/14 04:42 AM

I must apologize I do not write Poetry all too often anymore and am a wee bit rusty to say the least let alone do I usually share it with the masses. I generally save it for my loved one. So go easy on me guys but please do let me know what you think. I welcome criticism and ideas.


Thanks for sharing, it's very nice Greg!....flowerforyou ...Give us a look at some of your oldies?...We'll critique the hell out of them sugar!:wink:

dcastelmissy's photo
Thu 01/16/14 08:37 AM
I thought it was very expressive and heart warming! :thumbsup:

bidisha4chat's photo
Fri 01/17/14 09:23 PM
nice one :banana: :banana: :banana: laugh laugh