Topic: my first attempt in many many years
millsdd's photo
Sun 10/22/06 09:53 PM
As the darkness surrounds me and the shadows grow near
The cold grows bitter and deep within my soul
As despair of dawn comes upon me I have to ask why
And look to the heavens for the answer from high
In that moment I see the stars my friends
So distant yet bright, their words of support lessen my plight
She’s out there they tell me and to not give up hope
They’re the bright spots in my life in this time of need
Small points of light in darkness so vast
The hold and tell of promise of Dawns coming at last
Stars to me they are these friends of mine
And dawn she will be my Sun with the brightest of shine
To banish the night forever to end
Until dawn arrives with the love of my life
I'll take comfort in the stars my friends
I owe them my life

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Sun 10/22/06 09:58 PM
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, YOU GOT SOME TALENT THERE.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/22/06 10:10 PM
Awesome in my book, darn you do have a way with words.

Smile :)

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Sun 10/22/06 10:40 PM
good job.

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Sun 10/22/06 11:13 PM
TRY A SONG I'VE BEEN KIND-A WORKING ON FOR 10 YEARS,DAMM, YEH, LONGTIME.

IF IT TOOK TEARS TO GET YOU THROUGH THE GATES OF HEAVEN THEN I KNOW YOUR
BESIDE THE LORD TODAY.
FOR I NEVER SEEN SO MANY TEARS FALL AS I DID ON THAT DAY WHEN JESUS
CALLED,
ALL OF YOUR FAMILY, ALL OF YOUR FRIENDS, CAME TO SEE YOU ONCE AGAIN,
KNOWING THIS WOULD BE THEIR LAST GOOD-BYE,
SO MANY HEARTS HAVE BEEN BROKEN, SO MANY WORDS LEFT UNSPOKEN,
IN MY HEART YOU'LL ALWAYS-BE, AND IN MY THOUGHT'S I'LL ALWAYS SEE,
YOU'LL SMILING FACE LOOKING AT ME,
SO IF IT TOOK TEARS TO GET-YOU THROUGH THE GATES OF HEAVEN, THEN I KNOW
YOUR BESIDE THE LORD TODAY,


THIS WAS WRITTEN IN MY HEAD AFTER I LOST MY 15-YEAR OLD NIECE.
JUST A LITTLE BIT ABOUT WHAT I SEEN 400 STUDENTS AND MY BROTHER, AND
SISTER-INLAWS WORDS, KIDS NOT KNOWING HOW TO REACT AND JUST A RIVER OF
TEARS AND SORROW?

HAS ANY BODY GOT ANY IDEA'S ON ADDING SOME MORE?

Ontario's photo
Sun 10/22/06 11:15 PM
No...!

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 12/12/06 08:21 PM
Was searching through the old ones and thought this one needed to be
brought back up :)

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Tue 12/12/06 08:23 PM
Well I am glad you brought it back up Gurly, I missed it the first
time...Mills got some words!! Diggin it Mills!!

Gryphyn's photo
Tue 12/12/06 08:26 PM
Good Pull Txs. It is a real eye opener.

millsdd's photo
Tue 12/12/06 09:29 PM
blushin here and it ain't good to make a bald man blush ya'll
the neighbors will think the sun came up early !

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 12/13/06 07:41 AM
LMAO, too late the sun is shinning now for all to see!