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jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Sun 01/05/14 05:58 PM
A mirror I gaze into a reflection of me, More lines on my face then I care to see. Memories of happier times do abound, But now endless days pass much faster I've found. The clock continues ticking dare I look away? To glance up at midnight would end another day. Just remembering the children that follow behind, They are the seeds for the future of mankind. And these lines on my face only prove that I've spent, My past making memories as God only meant. John

paintecards01 Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 4725	Sun 01/05/14 07:12 PM
Very nice.

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Sun 01/05/14 07:18 PM
Very nice. Thank you!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 01/05/14 07:34 PM
Well done John...Sweet, soft, sad...

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Sun 01/05/14 07:48 PM
Well done John...Sweet, soft, sad... Thank you Leigh I always get a rush inside before posting my poetry.

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Sun 01/05/14 07:48 PM
Cool poem; can really relate to the thoughts.

Candiapples Joined Thu 07/18/13 Posts: 1941	Sun 01/05/14 07:53 PM


jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Sun 01/05/14 08:01 PM
Cool poem; can really relate to the thoughts. Most of what I write has a sort of darkness somewhere between the lines. TY!

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Sun 01/05/14 08:01 PM


Candiapples Joined Thu 07/18/13 Posts: 1941	Sun 01/05/14 08:05 PM
Jonny Didn't seem dark to me

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Sun 01/05/14 08:15 PM
Jonny Didn't seem dark to me I think the darkness is in the sadness of growing older and with the loneliness we can all feel at times when thinking about the past. I was hurting and in a sort of trance the night I wrote this...

Candiapples Joined Thu 07/18/13 Posts: 1941	Sun 01/05/14 08:19 PM
Jonny Didn't seem dark to me I think the darkness is in the sadness of growing older and with the loneliness we can all feel at times when thinking about the past. I was hurting and in a sort of trance the night I wrote this... I get that yes. I try not to think about the past. Theres nothing I can do to change it now. [[[[[Jonny]]]]]

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