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Topic: Rate me?
matt_s0688 Joined Mon 04/18/11 Posts: 3	Mon 12/30/13 03:10 PM
I'm not new here but I am to the forums. Tell me what you think and show me some love?

Phantom_Romance Joined Sun 02/07/10 Posts: 3	Mon 12/30/13 05:21 PM
I personally would take out the first paragraph or rewrite it. I don't think girls fighting over you in high school in relevant. It seems like bragging, and doesn't cast the right tone for an introduction. Also edit out the part about your parents calling girls you dated plain. It makes your parents seem a bit cold and judgmental. Not a very inviting glance into the future if you ever introduce your girlfriend to them.

matt_s0688 Joined Mon 04/18/11 Posts: 3	Mon 12/30/13 05:59 PM
Not quite what I meant but thanks for the input I suppose. Every parent is judgmental of their child's significant other because they believe they deserve the best.

characterless Joined Mon 12/30/13 Posts: 3	Mon 12/30/13 08:39 PM
I agree with Phantom Romance, it says a lot, but doesn't really tell me anything. I like your green shirt.

matt_s0688 Joined Mon 04/18/11 Posts: 3	Mon 12/30/13 10:32 PM
Thanks, I really didn't mean to have people rate my profile though, I just meant rate me. Profiles rarely say much to be honest, most of getting to know someone is talking to them

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