Topic: Letting Go
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Sat 12/07/13 01:23 PM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Sat 12/07/13 01:26 PM
Never in my wildest life
did I ever expect to meet
someone who took the time
to cleverly and totally vet me.

From the very first hello
to the next to last goodbye
the connection that we had
provoked a natural high.

Wanting to hold on tight
but needing to let it go
I couldn'��t allow our feelings
to spin this out of control.

They ate away at my psyche
like a ravaging painful cancer
and there never really was
any wrong or righteous answer.

Every move I made
was to gain a broader view,
every move you made
was to meet somebody new.

Leaving me to stand alone
you spent most of your time with them
I'��m sure you had your reasons
so I left to make my own friends.

Now we have moved on
no grass grows beneath our feet
we are both single agents
and there'��s plenty more people to meet.

Some will get up close
others will keep their distance,
and we'��ll each meet our match
on the path of least resistance.

Copyright � 2013
Karen Elizia

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Sat 12/07/13 02:54 PM
I Love this :heart:

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Sun 12/08/13 04:04 AM

I Love this :heart:


Hi Dawnette, it's nice to meet you. Thanks for stopping in to read and comment on my verse. I'm glad you enjoyed it. flowerforyou

Karen

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Sun 12/08/13 08:59 AM
flowerforyou
Welcome back !
Great to see you

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Sun 12/08/13 01:51 PM

flowerforyou
Welcome back !
Great to see you



Thanks, KiK, you always were a pal. waving

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Sun 12/08/13 02:30 PM
The poem is interesting though, its rhyme scheme pleases me more

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Sun 12/08/13 02:33 PM
I enjoyed thisflowerforyou drinker

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Sun 12/08/13 10:49 PM
Richly rewarding piece, Athena. I could taste the rhythms in this. I liked it!

tommy boy / Ireland

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Mon 12/09/13 03:24 AM
Thanks for commenting Tounde... glad you like my verse. smokin

2KidsMom! Hello my old friend! Love the sexy pose/pic. Thanks for stopping in. flowerforyou

Tommyboy, another long lost friend... good to see you again! drinker

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Wed 12/11/13 02:23 AM
wow!! im out of my league posting in this forum that was amazing

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Wed 12/11/13 03:25 AM

wow!! im out of my league posting in this forum that was amazing


Hi 0776, it's nice to meet you, welcome to Mingle. Nonsense, there aren't any leagues here, we're just having fun getting to know one another and expressing our thoughts in our own styles. I'm sure you'll do just fine, as we all can feed off each others work.

So join in and enjoy the forums... and thanks for the nice comment flowerforyou

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Wed 12/11/13 03:25 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Wed 12/11/13 05:02 AM

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:


old hippie, nice to see you again, still double thumbin it I see... thanks for droppin and to speak... flowerforyou

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Wed 12/11/13 07:06 AM


:thumbsup: :thumbsup:


old hippie, nice to see you again, still double thumbin it I see... thanks for droppin and to speak... flowerforyou



That is because I have not eloquent words to praise with...

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Wed 12/11/13 10:27 AM



:thumbsup: :thumbsup:


old hippie, nice to see you again, still double thumbin it I see... thanks for droppin in to speak... flowerforyou



That is because I have not eloquent words to praise with...


That's cool my old friend, I know that's your trademark move... I'm glad to see you're still around, and in good health? :heart:

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Wed 12/11/13 05:53 PM
Very nice

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Thu 12/12/13 01:12 AM

Very nice


pkh, nice to see you here as well... and thank you for dropping in to say hello. flowerforyou

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Thu 12/12/13 09:45 AM
This is so simple yet so deep, i love it

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Sat 12/14/13 01:13 AM

This is so simple yet so deep, i love it


Nice to make your acquaintance, Mikey... Welcome to Mingle. And thanks for reading and commenting. drinker