Topic: A Broken Cistern
Kizy95's photo
Tue 10/22/13 05:56 PM
Edited by Kizy95 on Tue 10/22/13 05:59 PM
My heart is a broken cistern

The waters kissed the ground when you left.

Now it is empty, so empty.

Dried cracks that cradled our love.

The years have grown old,

You've become wise.

You speak of love so faraway

It deafens.

But it is late,

Oh, too late.

My heart is a broken cistern,

It can hold no longer,

the waters of love...

pkh's photo
Wed 10/23/13 07:31 PM
I feel that too good write

Shy_Emo_chick's photo
Wed 10/23/13 08:25 PM
Would it be bad of me to say such a pun like "That's exactly where the crap should go, right down the toilet"? :)

Kizy95's photo
Thu 10/24/13 10:32 AM

I feel that too good write


Thanks happy

Kizy95's photo
Thu 10/24/13 10:33 AM

Would it be bad of me to say such a pun like "That's exactly where the crap should go, right down the toilet"? :)



I guess you mean the guy in the poem right? ohwell

no photo
Thu 10/24/13 10:51 AM
Heartfeltflowerforyou

Kizy95's photo
Thu 10/24/13 11:32 AM

Heartfeltflowerforyou



Thankie happy