Topic: Time To Say I'm Sorry
Mystique42's photo
Fri 08/31/07 08:10 PM
Tis the hardest thing
To admit our frailties
Or recollect where we have failed
Though our fate
Be tossed like a torn kite
Course taunted by a twisting wind
As we tighten up our sail


Though our love be true
How quick tongues bite
When anger stabs the heart
Words quickly said
We can't take back
Piercing loved ones till they dart.

Oh, to take back
The bitter breath
The hurt in all the angst
To realize the impending gift
In forgiveness I'd now find thanks.


Turmoil slumbers
Tears seize each thought
Knowing where I failed
Fears submerged
The loving urge
How did we get off trail?


Not a word
No kind reply
Words do not form tonight
A friend and lover lies awake
The wind echoing my plight.

Do not forsake me
Oh gentle wind
Carry my love afar
I calmly claim my love is true
Oh send one shining star.

Let him feel the love tonight,
As tears fill my heart and eyes,
Let God impede the hurt he feels,
Till he sees clearer skies.

Failed, I admit I did,
Yet if his love is true
Forgiveness shall reach his heart
For I forgave him too.

Punishment, this moment,
Alone I watch the skies,
Waiting, wishing, wanting
To wipe the tears I know he cries.

Swiftly cleanse his mind
Ease his hurting heart
Let me carry the burdon
Send him the promise of this star.
:heart:

SDF 8/31/07




shutterguy's photo
Fri 08/31/07 08:21 PM
deeply touched

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Fri 08/31/07 08:22 PM
Nice

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 08/31/07 08:27 PM
mystique, beautiful, kinda sounds like my lifeflowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Sat 09/01/07 04:57 PM
shutter, poison, blonde... thank you for your feedback!flowerforyou

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Sat 09/01/07 05:00 PM
Very Nice

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 09/01/07 05:08 PM
welcome my friendflowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sat 09/01/07 07:05 PM
very nice