Topic: Knife 2
oldhippie1952's photo
Fri 10/04/13 06:33 AM
Knife 2

Lay bare my chest
Steeled for your thrust
Deep and biting hard
Through my heart

Yea, twist your blade
Cause me pain unbearable
So I am slain
As dead as your love

So I lay parched and withered
Upon this desolate man
Where no seed of love
Can take root

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Fri 10/04/13 01:26 PM
drinker

Hear you pard !

oldhippie1952's photo
Fri 10/04/13 03:41 PM
Thanks kik drinker

littlelambkin's photo
Fri 10/04/13 07:33 PM
Edited by littlelambkin on Fri 10/04/13 07:35 PM

flowerforyou nice write,flowerforyou very creativeflowerforyou

oldhippie1952's photo
Sat 10/05/13 02:47 PM
Thank you lambkin.flowerforyou