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Topic: Knife 2
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 10/04/13 06:33 AM
Knife 2 Lay bare my chest Steeled for your thrust Deep and biting hard Through my heart Yea, twist your blade Cause me pain unbearable So I am slain As dead as your love So I lay parched and withered Upon this desolate man Where no seed of love Can take root

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Fri 10/04/13 01:26 PM
Hear you pard !

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 10/04/13 03:41 PM
Thanks kik

littlelambkin Joined Mon 02/25/13 Posts: 92	Fri 10/04/13 07:33 PM Edited by littlelambkin on Fri 10/04/13 07:35 PM
nice write, very creative

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sat 10/05/13 02:47 PM
Thank you lambkin.

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