Topic: I've written from my heart... | |
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Do you think it's okay to do so? I'm hoping it will encourage those who are too shy to write. But don't be, I am always ready to reply to anyone who wants to write me... Always!
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Ok, thanks.
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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow that was a lots of reading bt impressive
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well from an older lady's point of view her.. i think its WONDERFUL its what ..folks have told me mine should be...
you sound like an amazing person best wishes to you! |
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Edited by
Usnooze_Ulose
on
Thu 09/26/13 12:40 PM
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Hi Honestly. Here are my impressions after looking at your profile:
You are not smiling in your main photo. In fact, you look rather glum. Not good! Also you state, Why bother touching up your photos when he will see you when you meet in person anyways. I thought you were supposed to be such a caring woman. Saying that is almost as bad as saying Why bother to even post a photo, since he will see me when we meet. Also, your profile is way, way, way too wordy. Try just picking the top 5 activities that you and your lover could enjoy, using one word for each interest/activity. Finally, your text is way too wordy also. I would forget writing from the heart if I were you. In fact, I would scrap the entire text. Start over. Just mention that you are sweet, loving, and loyal. Describe concisely, rather than putting everything in a context. For example, forget stuff like "when we are sitting together, and i gaze lovingly at you..." .Just say that you are attentive. What are your interests during intimacy? Describe this. Again, just use descriptive adjectives here, dont write a romance novel. And finally, dont spend so much time and space writing about yourself. Write about your future lover. (Again, no romance novels here please.) Simply describe, in as few words as possible, exactly who and what you are looking for. Try going beyond the basics. OK, he needs to be sweet and loving, etc. Just mention this in passing. Get to the real stuff. Are you looking for a man who has an Alpha personality? Do you have any particular interests during intimacy? This is the kind of stuff that guys need to know right away. In other words, other than you being a sweetheart, what mutual desires and kinks (if you have any) do you have? Your text is not only way, way too wordy (and self-focused), but it is way too general. You leave me wondering, OK, you are a sweetheart, but what are your physical enjoyments? Practice writing concisely, and to the point. Watch your word count. Guys arent interested in reading a book here. You are a sweet, loving woman. You need to overcome your modesty here and just let folks know exactly in single words what you are really like. Do you like men who are rough in bed, or do you prefer gentle lovers in bed? Stuff like this. Dont think that you will share all of this stuff with him when you meet in person. It doesnt work that way honey. Use courage, and let people know exactly what you are like, even if you feel that you are revealing too much personal info. Otherwise, the folks that need to know wouldnt even know that you have this interest. So why would they respond to your personal? Just because you are such a sweetheart? I dont think so. Hugs |
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