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The corn field maze led me, or drew me
In different directions It was only corn, and if I felt like it I could have just cut through the stalks But I stick to the maze, and go this way and that I back track, I lose track of time, of names, of places It is just a corn field maze Designed to challenge me, to see if I will cheat, or Keep trying, try to find the way around, if not out I will keep trying because I know no other way The way around this maze, made of something once alive like me I could cheat, but less turns bring less possibilities Around corners, less chance to make choices that might be good To walk the maze without direction, without cheating Maybe I will find my way |
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Loved it somehow we always to find are way
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The corn field maze led me, or drew me In different directions It was only corn, and if I felt like it I could have just cut through the stalks But I stick to the maze, and go this way and that I back track, I lose track of time, of names, of places It is just a corn field maze Designed to challenge me, to see if I will cheat, or Keep trying, try to find the way around, if not out I will keep trying because I know no other way The way around this maze, made of something once alive like me I could cheat, but less turns bring less possibilities Around corners, less chance to make choices that might be good To walk the maze without direction, without cheating Maybe I will find my way So many lines to embrace, so much to smile about ...Your thinking is "right" thinking...These lines I especially like, "less turns bring less possibilities" and "less chance to make choices that might be good" ... Keenly wrapped up in the colors of fall, your words deliver! |
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Thank you Leigh and others. it has been a bad few days. my poetry and videos have come under fire with social services and they are watching me for child endangerment because of disturbing content. i really cannot believe this. i have been sober for almost 6 months. i get to work on time. i keep the children fed and get her off to school. i have done nothing wrong. i write the truth.
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Thank you Leigh and others. it has been a bad few days. my poetry and videos have come under fire with social services and they are watching me for child endangerment because of disturbing content. i really cannot believe this. i have been sober for almost 6 months. i get to work on time. i keep the children fed and get her off to school. i have done nothing wrong. i write the truth. |
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thank you Pam <3
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