Topic: stallion
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Mon 09/16/13 06:26 PM
A great white stallion
with his mare flowing in the wind
gallops across the plains
without boundaries.

A great white stallion
with thundering black hoofs
declares endless freedom
without boundaries.

A great white stallion
with fire igniting his eyes
refuses to live a life
with boundaries.

A great white stallion
with his mane flowing in the wind
gallops across the plains
without boundaries.

GYs41's photo
Tue 09/17/13 04:40 AM
Unci, apparently your stallion is quite majestic, but boundaries create him problems. Nice job, and I very strongly COMMEND the tight form of this poem. G.