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Topic: Suzy Falls
GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Mon 09/09/13 05:29 AM
When Suzy Falls is just a trickle the quiet issue of her voice nickels and dimes its way along and tickles the underside of just the larger stones. When Suzy Falls is running fast the power of her motion washes my soul and drains my bones. When Suzy falls, you see, the sheer, the sleek, the smooth, the in, the out, I always hope she falls on me.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 09/09/13 06:49 AM
Analogize!...Superb job!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 09/09/13 04:36 PM
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