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By all that is bad, you are good
Let me not forget it. While being held under in a place Not intended for love For all the bad, you are the good In tones from lips so softly spoken Pierce ears, once deaf, I listen In still silence, I wear your promises Like jewels, hanging, precious words dangling I see you in my mirror By all the bad, you are the good in me In the works of mine, you save, you save me I have a wanting, a desire to be placed in you Where I may flow with you as you, live in you As a river through your heart, as the breath in your lungs With all the bad, you are the good, so desperately searched With emptiness, you have made my past, let me never forget What hurt became of me, becomes healed, as I flow through You flow through me, our bodies rise and fall together Our bodies blend together, braid together, grow together My good, fleshed out by you |
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goldenhinde, that is one extremely nicely constructed poem. I tip my hat to you. You capture the deepest emotion with a calm tone that is so much better than the overly emotional and plaintiff cries for love. Again, good job. G.
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goldenhinde, that is one extremely nicely constructed poem. I tip my hat to you. You capture the deepest emotion with a calm tone that is so much better than the overly emotional and plaintiff cries for love. Again, good job. G. What more could anyone say?....So many times you bring my emotions to the surface by putting into words that which is supposed to be impossible to put into words....This, for me, is one of your best Golden! |
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Christopher is the best, how could I not write one of my best? <3
Thank you both. xxx |
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