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Topic: Most Unsettling
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Fri 08/30/13 12:30 PM
Most unsettling, this terrain, sub cranium I am a terrarium, contained, my own ecosystem But my ground is unsettling, sentiments accumulating Like the sediment, finely, filling blemishes, has been Fanned away, exposing, cracks that reach to the core of me Most unsettling, this sediment emptying from my floor Revealing a trap door, falling out from under me Most unsettling, I hold my head and stomach This motion sickness, terrifies me, dries my mouth and eyes Most unsettling, this feeling, of lost control, finally lost After finding, I am in a panic from feelings Most unsettling, almost, upsetting, very changing, ground breaking Heart breaking, could be in the making, heart draining, exciting Most of all, unsettling

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mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Mon 09/02/13 02:55 AM
Most unsettling, this terrain, sub cranium I am a terrarium, contained, my own ecosystem But my ground is unsettling, sentiments accumulating Like the sediment, finely, filling blemishes, has been Fanned away, exposing, cracks that reach to the core of me Most unsettling, this sediment emptying from my floor Revealing a trap door, falling out from under me Most unsettling, I hold my head and stomach This motion sickness, terrifies me, dries my mouth and eyes Most unsettling, this feeling, of lost control, finally lost After finding, I am in a panic from feelings Most unsettling, almost, upsetting, very changing, ground breaking Heart breaking, could be in the making, heart draining, exciting Most of all, unsettling This poem says it all

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Mon 09/02/13 07:28 AM
Mig, coffee, sometime

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