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Topic: Nerves
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Thu 08/01/13 07:05 PM
If I don't say anything, it does not mean I don't think it, and if I think it, I will likely write it here or There In plain view or hidden If I don't show it, it does not mean I don't feel it, and if I feel it It may hurt myself, or it may hurt You And there are the endings of my nerves Fanning the air like tall grass My nerves brush against him I wish his thoughts brushed against me As clouds blanket me I would like to blanket him

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 08/02/13 02:15 AM
If I don't say anything, it does not mean I don't think it, and if I think it, I will likely write it here or There In plain view or hidden If I don't show it, it does not mean I don't feel it, and if I feel it It may hurt myself, or it may hurt You And there are the endings of my nerves Fanning the air like tall grass My nerves brush against him I wish his thoughts brushed against me As clouds blanket me I would like to blanket him Wow!!! This is how I want to write. I love this golden I realy do!!

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Fri 08/02/13 07:07 AM
Mig, you're awesome!

sanjeev009 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 2115	Fri 08/02/13 07:13 AM
very nice

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