the most
believable lie
is the one
with a pearl
of truth
within
but,what
do I do
with these eyes
and
the room
sighed
began to take sides
the walls for her
the floor and ceiling
for him
and
what do i do
with these eyes
the flower
lays in the painting
silent
I want to
feel the flower
be the flower
but
a flower
is a flower
is a flower
and
what do i do
with these eyes

Liked this very much

Deck ...

I always love reading you...smooth, undulating...lovely

*Teasing, forgive my momentary editing whim, but so you know my warm, warm friend, this is exactly how I see your baser structure:

The most believable lie is the one with a pearl
of truth within,

But,what do I do with these eyes?

And the room sighed, began to take sides,
The walls for her, the floor and ceiling for him.

And what do i do with these eyes?

The flower lays in the painting, silent.

I want to feel the flower, be the flower.

But a flower is a flower . . . is a flower.

And, what do i do with these eyes??!

Teasing

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*By the necessary by, this is exceptional! Very, ' full of life '.

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tazzops...
Deck...sweet.
hippie..
Artgurl...thankyou for reading!
sanjeev....
d4tc...back at ya.
tommyboy...a funny thing,i did have it written that way,changed it,thankyou,appreciate your sight....teasing.