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Topic: The Muse's Phases
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Tue 07/09/13 12:42 PM
The distance doesn't phase me When I can face you You are on my mind and I want you On me, inside of me The space between us Does not phase me You read me well You are a fine writer You draw a line with my fingers You are a good artist With every new view of you My loneliness doesn't phase me Don't be long in Your absence Be long in distance Not in hours Ours is not a single Time or place What is ours I carry with me With empty hands

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 07/09/13 12:51 PM
The distance doesn't phase me When I can face you You are on my mind and I want you On me, inside of me The space between us Does not phase me You read me well You are a fine writer You draw a line with my fingers You are a good artist With every new view of you My loneliness doesn't phase me Don't be long in Your absence Be long in distance Not in hours Ours is not a single Time or place What is ours I carry with me With empty hands love it

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Tue 07/09/13 12:53 PM
Like it !

ridewytepony Joined Sun 04/14/13 Posts: 3697	Tue 07/09/13 10:03 PM
actually, I did like that, its refreshing from the crap I write I'm I the guy, am I the guy you lone for in the peom peace my girl

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 07/10/13 12:34 AM
Loved it

falkon99 Joined Thu 06/27/13 Posts: 158	Wed 07/10/13 12:39 AM
Very nice ..The top in creativity .

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Wed 07/10/13 02:49 AM
actually, I did like that, its refreshing from the crap I write I'm I the guy, am I the guy you lone for in the peom peace my girl Pony ya numskull, I wrote another one for you. it says "for Pony" in the comments, Duh!

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 07/10/13 02:51 AM


Jez Joined Wed 03/16/11 Posts: 179	Wed 07/10/13 05:11 AM
Brilliant! You'll have enough for your own book soon.

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Wed 07/10/13 05:16 AM
Brilliant! You'll have enough for your own book soon. Stick around. I want to write more than one!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 07/10/13 06:59 AM

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