Topic: Will You?
whispertoascream's photo
Thu 08/23/07 10:31 AM
When I am down
Will you hold me?
When I feel the world has left me behind
Will you be there with me?
When I feel all alone, with no place else to go
Will you take my hand and bring me in?
Will you be there by my side when these tears I do cry?
Will you hold me and help everything feel alright?

I feel alone sometimes and just want somebody by my side
Somebody that can help heal the pain and be my guide
I need somebody that will not give up
Cause my life is not smooth sailing, it is rather rough

So hold me when I am down,
Make me smile and not frown
Cause in you I see what I need
And in me you can feel free

Melissa Aug 23rd 2007

LAMom's photo
Thu 08/23/07 10:38 AM
(((( Whisper ))))

Remember when in time of lonelyness Reach out your hand I am there,, Holding you deep in my heart,, :heart:

Puffins1958's photo
Thu 08/23/07 10:46 AM
Melissa....

So very touching...

:cry: brokenheart :cry:

lissa_327's photo
Thu 08/23/07 10:53 AM
Absolutly beautiful!

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 08/23/07 10:57 AM
very heartfelt..:smile:

no photo
Thu 08/23/07 11:08 AM
wow that hit me like a ton of bricks...thanks...:cry:

beautiful--

no photo
Thu 08/23/07 11:10 AM
the eternal quest we are ALL looking for ... yes ?.. :) wonderfully writen .... :)