Topic: Styx
FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/07/13 06:58 PM
Don’t let the darkness swallow you whole
In your corner of this hollow world.

Don’t forget your paddle heading up there,
That River has claimed millions a year.

Break for the shore after the sun hits the surface,
Make sure that you head for the right current.

And then…Disappear.

no photo
Sun 07/07/13 09:50 PM
smokin :heart: :heart: smokin

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 07/07/13 11:53 PM
Thank you, cutie.:heart: flowerforyou smokin

pkh's photo
Mon 07/08/13 03:51 AM
Nice write

FearandLoathing's photo
Mon 07/08/13 04:37 PM
Thank you as always, pkh...I'm glad you enjoyed the read.

Journeyman236's photo
Mon 07/08/13 06:04 PM
Will I need Charon's obol for passage?

FearandLoathing's photo
Mon 07/08/13 11:20 PM

Will I need Charon's obol for passage?


Might help with the journey.

Cheers, Journey.

ridewytepony's photo
Mon 07/08/13 11:32 PM
I like my poems, like I like my woman, shallow and raunchy:wink:

but a change is as good as a rest.

thats good man, chichen soup for the sole

peace:thumbsup:
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FearandLoathing's photo
Wed 07/10/13 02:23 PM
Holy hell, my bad...Sorry to leave ya hanging.smokin

Hopefully you enjoyed it with the lack of shallow and raunchy, hah. Thank you for your comments, glad you could glean something from it.

goldenhinde's photo
Wed 07/10/13 02:33 PM
water can be a versatile vehicle.
Nice

FearandLoathing's photo
Wed 07/10/13 07:20 PM
Thank you, golden...Glad you enjoyed it.flowerforyou

MarkNtash's photo
Sat 07/13/13 11:43 AM
Liked!!!!! Very much

FearandLoathing's photo
Sat 07/13/13 05:31 PM
Wicked, thank you...Haven't experimented with shorter pieces in awhile, good to see people enjoy it.