Topic: My Love...
lookforyou's photo
Thu 10/19/06 06:41 PM


In light,
Softly glowing by the moonbeams,
My eyes adjust to see sleeping beauty,
It's real although a fantasy it seems
To wake with your magic beside of me.

Arriving unexpected while I dream,
I see you watch my waking to what is real,
Blue eyes sparkle in a skin of light cream,
I hesitate to dissipate with feel,

But reaching,
I enfold you in my dream,
We intertwine beyond walking moments,
Mingle fantasy and glowing moonbeams,

Then the sun rises and the night is spent.

- the sound of the closing door wakes me up,
- a note rests under a steaming teacup.
P. Christopher

TheShadow's photo
Thu 10/19/06 06:45 PM
Your profile said you looking for woman for dating. Does a guy having
long hair count. LMAO

beautyinthechaos's photo
Thu 10/19/06 06:46 PM
Very Impressive

no photo
Fri 10/20/06 12:43 PM
i think it was nice!

Ontario's photo
Fri 10/20/06 01:24 PM
Dude... again with the Sappy Lines, I love Poetry and this ain,t it.

Chuckee's photo
Fri 10/20/06 01:28 PM
Wow, I'm glad you went there b4 I did. "And thats all I got to say
'bout that!" (forest gump) lol

no photo
Fri 10/20/06 01:54 PM
Yeah it isnt great ontario and chuckee.. but try this..I challenge
either of you to do better.. Bet YOU CAN"T WILL

Ontario's photo
Fri 10/20/06 09:19 PM
Dude...Its impossible, to intentionally write something that confused
unless you to are lost.

lookforyou's photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:02 PM
I have a BA in Psychology and some of what i write is about past people
I only post it here on the presumption that someone out there can use it
for thier own good.
thanks for the comment

P.Christopher

Ontario's photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:13 PM
Are you impling we need Psychological help?

lookforyou's photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:28 PM
Not at all ontario, atleast not you. No seriously, I just give a damn
about people. Let me ask you, Have you been out on a date and really
been dumbfounded on what to say at that certian moment.
I know I have.
. But thanks for your comments. Keep them coming
P. Christopher

Ontario's photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:30 PM
Perhaps you should review my Post... What is Romance, or Battle to be on
Top.

lookforyou's photo
Fri 10/20/06 10:42 PM
Ontario. will do . Thanks

no photo
Sat 10/21/06 12:36 AM
..."at least not you" lmao..i take you have already met a few people on
here then? lol

no photo
Sat 10/21/06 12:57 AM
Lookforyou,

Good post !

Some people don't understnd poetry.

Have you ever seen the movie " Boxing Helena " ?

If not I think you'll like it!

I've studied psyc for many yrs too

I'm working on Life Coaching now,

Keep up your work, it will bring good energy your way

no photo
Sat 10/21/06 12:57 AM
Lookforyou,

Good post !

Some people don't understnd poetry.

Have you ever seen the movie " Boxing Helena " ?

If not I think you'll like it!

I've studied psyc for many yrs too

I'm working on Life Coaching now,

Keep up your work, it will bring good energy your way