Topic: RAPTURE
flech11's photo
Fri 06/21/13 08:26 AM
hold the light and bury the fire
save the love choking desire
have what you want leave what you will
carry away yet never refill
how long can we take
before the earth will break
right below the ground will start
to slowly crack and fall apart
every color sight and sound
every moment you have found
collects again and starts to spin
all beggins here within

dhi06's photo
Fri 06/21/13 08:33 AM
,h0w i wish i can write as beautiful as this ! .like .

dovebear's photo
Fri 06/21/13 08:55 AM
My brother, You have a very profound understanding. I love this poem, Especially the first two lines.