Topic: The Date
goldenhinde's photo
Mon 06/17/13 02:54 PM
Edited by goldenhinde on Mon 06/17/13 02:57 PM
She had been excited for the date. It was her birthday and a special evening was planned. It was dinner and a movie. She was not particular where he took her for dinner, but was very excited about the movie "Queen of the Damned", especially since the voice over was done by the dead actress's brother.


She carefully selected a dress at the shop. It was a special occasion after all. She had been in town a few months and she wanted to make a good impression. She is very ritualistic and pays close attention to the details. In advance, she had gone through the lingerie in her drawer and bought a new pair of thigh highs in black to match her bra and panties. The threesome complimented the wine colored sheath dress in chiffon.


Home from work, she hastily unlocked the door to her house. She set out her ensemble on her bed and prepared the shower. The water was extremely hot, making her dizzy so she braced herself against the tile. She closed her eyes and imagined how the night would progress.


She reached for the razor and drew the blade over her legs, underarms and bikini area. She lathered her hair and body. She dare not touch her hardened nipples or lower regions for fear of spoiling the evenings anticipated activities.


She toweled off, brushed her hair and spritzed some "Co Co" under her navel, behind her knees, and on her breasts. She latched the silver and marcasite necklace around her neck and hung the Victorian style chandelier earrings from her lobes.


She sat on the edge of her bed and smoothed the lotion on her legs and arms. She assessed herself in the mirror and she watched herself as she stepped through the black satin panties and hooked her push up bra. Nervously she slipped on the dress and zipped the back. She used her hands and brushed the dress down, nice and straight. She pulled up the stockings, just a few inches from there...


Her phone rang. She jumped, and ran to the phone.

"Hello?" she said

"What? But it's my birthday. We had plans".

"You're breaking up with me tonight?"

"But I was looking so foreword to this" her voice trailed off.


"I didn't really want to see "The Queen of the Damned", he said.

Journeyman236's photo
Mon 06/17/13 03:31 PM
You should write for those romance novel books!

goldenhinde's photo
Mon 06/17/13 03:32 PM
Do you read those kind of books, Journey?

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Mon 06/17/13 03:35 PM
Exquisite detail and thought provoking!
Well done! flowerforyou

goldenhinde's photo
Mon 06/17/13 03:36 PM
This, my dear lady, is not fiction.

goldenhinde's photo
Mon 06/17/13 03:38 PM
I should be getting drunk now, but I am 70 days sober. These confessions are such a rush

Journeyman236's photo
Mon 06/17/13 04:05 PM
No I don't read romance novels! LOL laugh But if you wrote one I might! That's some good stuff:thumbsup: It's like erotic & stuff:tongue:

goldenhinde's photo
Mon 06/17/13 04:09 PM
Well, Journey
That's very nice of you. Much appreciated.

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Mon 06/17/13 04:11 PM

I should be getting drunk now, but I am 70 days sober. These confessions are such a rush


Confessions are good for the soul!
It helps you be honest with yourself!
70 days - You should be dammmmm proud!
Well done, my friend! flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 06/17/13 04:15 PM

Well, Journey
That's very nice of you. Much appreciated.
id would read it for sure to. By the way keep up the good work on your sobriety. It really makes my day to hear that

Journeyman236's photo
Mon 06/17/13 04:15 PM
I look forward to reading your stuff & congrats on the 70 days!:banana:

goldenhinde's photo
Mon 06/17/13 04:21 PM
Thanks for the congrats on 70. it hasn't been easy but I am working it.

I like that you like my stuff too. I will think of you while at work tonight. It will make the time pass faster.

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Mon 06/17/13 04:22 PM
Very sorry to hear that happened to you Gold.
But it really was very descriptive and erotic as well
Congrats on the 70 days sober too !
Maybe you should consider trying your hand at a novel sometime ?
You have great and descriptive writing.
And just to put it out there...
I have read a few romance novels in my life.
Didn't make me any less a man for it either...
Nice write for sure !
flowerforyou
And i'm sorry for your pain...


bastet126's photo
Mon 06/17/13 05:07 PM
ouch golden!! you should have told him you had changed your mind and
rented "the jerk" for the two of you to watch... i enjoyed the read tho flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 06/17/13 11:49 PM
I just wanted to add you share so much with us in your writes everyday they are written so well and amaze me always. I'm sorry for the pain in this one your a beautiful human being keep doing what your doing. Hugs