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Topic: Dragon Flies
goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sat 06/15/13 11:32 AM
The dragon flies are here Living life What is it like to fly? To not be anchored to the ground? To see things from different perspectives Unavoidably? The dragon flies are here For a short time they dance for me And if one invited me, I would join them Cut anchors To see different perspectives Unavoidably

Journeyman236 Joined Thu 05/09/13 Posts: 2786	Sat 06/15/13 11:37 AM
Nice! I've noticed the dragonflies start to zoom around alot right before a thunderstorm

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sat 06/15/13 11:40 AM
I am watching them. I am envious!

Journeyman236 Joined Thu 05/09/13 Posts: 2786	Sat 06/15/13 11:42 AM
Is it about to storm where you are? I get alot of Hummingbirds around here, those are cool!

goldenhinde Joined Wed 12/12/12 Posts: 631	Sat 06/15/13 11:46 AM
not sure about a storm. it is a moody day though

dovebear Joined Tue 06/04/13 Posts: 88	Sat 06/15/13 05:18 PM
This poem is amazing!! I also love dragon flies, They are like my guardians, they fly with me when I go for walks around the lake and I know that when dragon flies are around in abundance its a sure sign that the mosquitoes are getting eaten all up. :D

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 06/15/13 08:49 PM


tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Mon 06/17/13 02:25 AM
Dragonfly . . . Adjective: (esp. of something written or spoken) Briefly and clearly expressed. Synonyms: concise - terse - brief - laconic - compendious - short ** Well Done, Golden. Well done! I cannot recall a poem so packed with life and flavored with such true expression. This ' brief ' reads well and does bring to mind just how much we ' all ' should wish to join the dragonfly - and fly. Freedom is ours! tommy boy ===

Jez Joined Wed 03/16/11 Posts: 179	Mon 06/17/13 07:15 AM
Cut anchors To see different perspectives Unavoidably Wish-fulfilment meets chaos. Brilliant.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 06/17/13 07:23 AM
Your work is proof, you are soaring Golden girl!!..

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