Topic: the abyss
searchingsearching's photo
Tue 06/11/13 07:49 PM
Edited by searchingsearching on Tue 06/11/13 08:35 PM
it's right there in front of me
the darkness bellows it's call
i just made new wings
maybe i was destined to fall
it's dark and lonely
i've lost my light
i know it's not down there
just sick of the fight
too long it's been
the years go on
still i'm alone
surrounded by happiness
none to call my own
still it stares
i've caught it's gaze
maybe i'll go
spend the rest of my days
beats the nothing up here
least i won't be alone
join the wretched and discarded
they won't see me though
nor i them
just the abyss
will give me my last kiss


pkh's photo
Wed 06/12/13 04:05 AM
Been there, good write

ryemck's photo
Wed 06/12/13 04:11 AM
Your literature is bad and you should feel bad!

searchingsearching's photo
Wed 06/12/13 05:54 AM
well, considering it's the 7th thing i've ever written, then okay. I'll take that as it is. Least it was original, unlike your comment.