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Topic: YOU LIED
Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Sun 05/26/13 02:08 AM
Why did you lie - and pretend to me - of who you were - what did i see - i thought the world - revolved around you - with all my heart - i loved you true - you broke my heart - and made me cry - now i am left - to wonder why?.........

Solace84 Joined Mon 04/30/12 Posts: 322	Sun 05/26/13 02:40 AM
That's just the ugly side of love...it stings as hell atimes.... So do pick up your pieces and move on..not that easy but life must go on

Solace84 Joined Mon 04/30/12 Posts: 322	Sun 05/26/13 02:51 AM
He lied to you cos he's as fake as hell...you thought the world revolved around him cos you thought that all that glitered were gold...

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Sun 05/26/13 07:16 AM
Thank you for all your comments Solace84....... ...what you said is true....And yes.....i am TRYING to move on......

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 05/26/13 07:31 AM
geez, I really need to keep up with the readings...

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Sun 05/26/13 03:02 PM
Thank you oldhippie...lol...

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Sun 05/26/13 03:47 PM
Perhaps it is Most best well said That better love True lies ahead ... Be Blessed

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Sun 05/26/13 08:05 PM
Thank you kik2me.......you are a TRUE POET........You have such a sweet heart......

Momoiro_Usagi_7 Joined Sun 05/12/13 Posts: 1450	Mon 05/27/13 12:22 AM
Why did you lie - and pretend to me - of who you were - what did i see - i thought the world - revolved around you - with all my heart - i loved you true - you broke my heart - and made me cry - now i am left - to wonder why?......... Know that feeling not a good one that's for sure! I liked it ^__^

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Mon 05/27/13 04:53 AM
Thankyou Usagi 7.....

Jez Joined Wed 03/16/11 Posts: 179	Thu 05/30/13 02:19 PM
Ah, that sucks. (The situation, not the poem!) Hope the guy is berating himself for leading you on, and that you find a decent man soon.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 05/30/13 02:50 PM
(((Affection)))...So many of us have been down that road ...I'm sorry it happened to you...

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1539	Thu 05/30/13 11:59 PM
Why did you lie - and pretend to me - of who you were - what did i see - i thought the world - revolved around you - with all my heart - i loved you true - you broke my heart - and made me cry - now i am left - to wonder why?......... He lied because he's an idiot . . . and I know I know it's only a poem. Nice one too

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Fri 05/31/13 04:04 AM
Thankyou Jezzemy.....All i know is what goes around comes comes around three fold..............Carma WILL.....one day bite him in the ***!!!!!.......Thank you for your kind words.....

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Fri 05/31/13 04:08 AM
Thank you Leigh...for your caring...my mingle friends as you too are really helping me feel better.....

Affectionisme Joined Sun 02/17/13 Posts: 173	Fri 05/31/13 04:11 AM
Thank you mig2 .......he WAS an IDIOT!!!!!!..........And yes....it did happen to me.....it was real...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 05/31/13 07:49 AM

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