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Topic: Can you solve the puzzle?
stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Tue 04/23/13 12:15 PM
How many times have you seen a flower blossom? How many tries did you take to see it jostle? How many times did you get yourself jumbled? To see how many petals does each of them buckle. Not a human soul can track this hustle, Only the hummingbird has the patience to solve this puzzle.

Winlei Joined Sat 01/26/13 Posts: 4048	Thu 04/25/13 08:21 PM
What a nice rhyme. Hehe. Yeah, this is a piece where human is impatient to solved the puzzle.

stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Thu 04/25/13 10:59 PM
What a nice rhyme. Hehe. Yeah, this is a piece where human is impatient to solved the puzzle. Exactly....humans species are actually impatient.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 04/27/13 05:19 AM
Did you know that Hummingbirds can fly backward?...Nice thoughts in this one Steven!

stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Sat 04/27/13 09:31 AM Edited by stevenct56 on Sat 04/27/13 09:35 AM


stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Sat 04/27/13 09:34 AM
Did you know that Hummingbirds can fly backward?...Nice thoughts in this one Steven! Thank you. :) Sorry, I wasn't aware about that. I've noticed hummingbirds just moving about a particular flower of its choice and just floating for a long time analyzing it until it takes the plunge of extracting the nectar.

jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 2105	Sat 04/27/13 05:50 PM Edited by jemare on Sat 04/27/13 05:51 PM
I can be patient sometimes and can enjoy just sitting in my garden for hours at a time. If I had a penny for every flower I've watched over the years..... I'd be a very rich lady But I'm rich enough just being able to see (and sometimes smell) the flowers Your poetic thought was a nice read.

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sat 04/27/13 05:51 PM
Did you know that Hummingbirds can fly backward?...Nice thoughts in this one Steven! They are the only birds that can fly backwards.

stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Sat 04/27/13 11:27 PM
I can be patient sometimes and can enjoy just sitting in my garden for hours at a time. If I had a penny for every flower I've watched over the years..... I'd be a very rich lady But I'm rich enough just being able to see (and sometimes smell) the flowers Your poetic thought was a nice read. Thank you. You're on your way on becoming a hummingbird. ;)

stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Sat 04/27/13 11:29 PM
Did you know that Hummingbirds can fly backward?...Nice thoughts in this one Steven! They are the only birds that can fly backwards. Well...guess thats the hummingbird moonwalking. MJ reincarnated. ;)

Lianne22 Joined Fri 05/03/13 Posts: 2	Mon 05/06/13 10:53 AM
A waiting game? That's ok, all in good time. Patients is the grace of a saint. We have hind-site for us us being hummingbirds and lights of love. I didn't even know I was a poet!!! Thanks for that. Le-Le

stevenct56 Joined Thu 06/30/11 Posts: 55	Mon 05/06/13 12:41 PM
A waiting game? That's ok, all in good time. Patients is the grace of a saint. We have hind-site for us us being hummingbirds and lights of love. I didn't even know I was a poet!!! Thanks for that. Le-Le Okay... :) glad you realized your potential.

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