Hi there, any feed back or ideas to make it better be much appreciated.
Thanks oxonfox

First, you need a picture. Ladies searching for a guy may not even find you if they select to view only profiles with pictures, so you're cutting yourself out, there. All ladies, unless they're blind, will want to see a picture of you, eventually, so smile and point your camera phone at yourself and snap it.

Next is your description. Think about describing yourself and the people you want to meet. The quote you put there is a nice start, but it doesn't really stand on its own for a description of you.