Topic: Rate me from mildura
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Fri 03/29/13 03:31 AM
Hi
Looking for my dream man
Please
Rate me from milduraflowerforyou love

Mortman's photo
Wed 04/03/13 08:59 PM
You might attract more interest if you didn't look like a dog. Just kidding, but the dog photo really doesn't seem to belong. You should get some pictures of yourself, including a clear view of your face, maybe wearing something nice, and being well-lit. Also a photo of your full body would help, too. You may not want to marry a guy who only cares about your physical appearance, but even guys who like you on the inside might feel more attraction if they see what you're like on the outside, first.

Your description text is pretty good, but it's a bit confusing in parts, as to what you mean.

For example, here's what you wrote:

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Fun loving, affectionate and romantic I am.
enjoy the outdoors Golf, I enjoy football,cricket ,Fishing , camping. Playing Pool .
I also enjoy sleeping under the stars with that special man of mine.
I like socializing with friends
Looking for a genuine,
settle down type of relationship? Possibly with the right person.
At the moment,
I want a happy, friendly companion who takes me as I am.
If it leads to a dream relationship, then I'm hoping for that too. nights with a good friend, a nice dinner and a movie...
Independent,sociable, Warm-hearted ,Funny,Trustworthy,cheeky at time,s
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And here's how I'd write it:
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I am fun-loving, affectionate and romantic. I enjoy sports and outdoor activities as well as socializing with friends. I want a happy, friendly companion who can accept me as I am. I enjoy nights with good friends, as well as the occasional dinner and a movie. You should be warm, funny, trustworthy as well as cheeky at times.

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(then list the specific sports and activities in the "Interests" section of your profile)

What you wrote was a bit confusing and I might not have interpreted it correclty. The odd capitalization didn't help. Also, lose the dog picture, unless "dogs" is one of your key interests.

I hope that helps. Good luck!

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Wed 04/03/13 10:04 PM
Edited by KiK2me on Wed 04/03/13 10:07 PM

Hi
Looking for my dream man
Please
Rate me from milduraflowerforyou love


I think i found your perfect match !
He seems to tink you are really HOTT !

And he said he knows this out back place that serves the BEST spaghetti
And meat balls...

:wink:

Welcome to mingle2 and best of luck in finding who you seek...!

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Wed 04/03/13 10:11 PM
Edited by techknowlove on Wed 04/03/13 10:13 PM
So you're expecting me to travel to Mildura just to rate you?! noway

Joking aside, I like the profile. Switching out the picture would be my only suggestion.

Regards!
The Wizard