Topic: hO sO eVer cOmE nD rAtE mE.....
psyris's photo
Thu 03/28/13 05:37 PM
rate me

Mortman's photo
Thu 03/28/13 09:53 PM
The text, which currently, only says "insane" makes you look like a troubled loner. It doesn't help that "fighting" is one of your interests. (do you mean engaging in fighting or watching professional fights?) Not sure the angle you're working, there. Does that usually work for you? Seriously?

So, you could probably better explain what you mean in your description text. You could also fix the spelling.

Your profile picture doesn't give a clear view of your face. The photo you use, now, makes you look small and lonesome. Also, a little artsy, maybe misunderstood. They're all really interesting pictures, obviously edited and filtered, but not really the kind that lets us see how good looking you are.

On the other hand, if that "sophisticated, troubled artist" is what you're going for, you may have nailed it, and you just might attract that goth, art school girl of your dreams.

Good luck!

no photo
Thu 03/28/13 10:02 PM

rate me

Where are you?? I havent checked profile,because even on here,i cant see you yet..

no photo
Thu 03/28/13 10:10 PM
Yeah, your ad's gotta have more depth. Let the ladies know your interests and what you're looking for.

I like your pictures, though. They're ballin'!!

You have some work to do, my friend.

psyris's photo
Fri 03/29/13 03:43 AM
thanX friendS

psyris's photo
Fri 03/29/13 03:52 AM
nD brO Mortman i m jUst sTudiNg riGht noW.......nD i M a MMA figHteR.......tOo

Mortman's photo
Fri 03/29/13 04:01 PM

nD brO Mortman i m jUst sTudiNg riGht noW.......nD i M a MMA figHteR.......tOo


OK. Maybe you can get a lesson in capitalization. What you just typed here is almost unreadable.