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| Topic: Saturday Night at the Firehouse Grill | |
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the band is loud
waves of sound that shatter but make no sound they take control communication lost please don't introduce yourself acrid tinge of smoke liquor obfuscates bad breath love is in the air a pungent reminder of human decay careless glances look my way women that scan for attention steeped in their own vanity their men swaggering confidence with staggering Idiocracy I pity the roles they have to play while drinking their cares away in search of conflicted pleasures it's feeding time at the zoo the band plays on... "squeeze me baby, till the juice runs down leg" overindulgence stumbles while it falls how will I find sexual desire gawking at rows of dirty toilets? between sets I hear ooooos and aaahhhs shouted at the flat screen as one man beats another senseless excited truths are exclaimed "THAT'S gotta hurt!" empty conversations to fill empty lives as isolated as am I there is no hiding the deeper pain that is abiding my shutters slowly close I am so very tired but comfort is no encumbrance to pay any mind what am I doing here? I don't hate I hate what they create fear on tap with a liquor chaser and sex handing out false promises now the vacuum crackles hoovering peanuts at the bar it's time to retire but where to go from here? where is that love that follows? the road home looks long this crisp and chilly night. |
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!!
 Bravo!
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Edited by
KiK2me
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Sun 03/10/13 02:26 PM
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Another average night at the club for me
lol  {If i drank that is} |
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo! Often it's inspiring to watch the bands perform there. Still searching. |
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo! Often it's inspiring to watch the bands perform there. Still searching. Jessie's Crutch!!  ..I don't know how I missed that Richard!
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Another average night at the club for me lol {If i drank that is} Yeah, I'm probably going back next week. What the hell. |
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo! Often it's inspiring to watch the bands perform there. Still searching. Jessie's Crutch!! ..I don't know how I missed that Richard! Yes, but tell me what you REALLY think.
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo! Often it's inspiring to watch the bands perform there. Still searching. Jessie's Crutch!! ..I don't know how I missed that Richard! Yes, but tell me what you REALLY think. I really think your writing is improving at break neck speed  ...I like this one very much! 
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i could see it all......great!
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo! Often it's inspiring to watch the bands perform there. Still searching. Jessie's Crutch!! ..I don't know how I missed that Richard! Yes, but tell me what you REALLY think. I really think your writing is improving at break neck speed ...I like this one very much! Thank you that's what is most important to me
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i could see it all......great! Thank you teasing. That's what I was going for. 
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the band is loud waves of sound that shatter but make no sound they take control communication lost please don't introduce yourself acrid tinge of smoke liquor obfuscates bad breath love is in the air a pungent reminder of human decay careless glances look my way women that scan for attention steeped in their own vanity their men swaggering confidence with staggering Idiocracy I pity the roles they have to play while drinking their cares away in search of conflicted pleasures it's feeding time at the zoo the band plays on... "squeeze me baby, till the juice runs down leg" overindulgence stumbles while it falls how will I find sexual desire gawking at rows of dirty toilets? between sets I hear ooooos and aaahhhs shouted at the flat screen as one man beats another senseless excited truths are exclaimed "THAT'S gotta hurt!" empty conversations to fill empty lives as isolated as am I there is no hiding the deeper pain that is abiding my shutters slowly close I am so very tired but comfort is no encumbrance to pay any mind what am I doing here? I don't hate I hate what they create fear on tap with a liquor chaser and sex handing out false promises now the vacuum crackles hoovering peanuts at the bar it's time to retire but where to go from here? where is that love that follows? the road home looks long this crisp and chilly night. See this is why I don't go out. Nice on sinner |
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Very vivid imagary . . I liked it.
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I skipped the sticky part...too much for my weak heart..haha!..
Good read, DaySinner... 
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo! Often it's inspiring to watch the bands perform there. Still searching. Jessie's Crutch!! ..I don't know how I missed that Richard! Yes, but tell me what you REALLY think. I really think your writing is improving at break neck speed ...I like this one very much! Thank you that's what is most important to me Same here Richard...Commonalities lead us to our friends! 
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo! |
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Hummmmm......Cynical, sarcastic, snide, acrimonious...We have a winner!! Bravo!
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Liking the write DS...
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I tried something different and it seems to have resulted in improvement. Thank you all so very much!
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nicely done.
just the right amount put in and the same for what was left out (which for me, is equally as important) |
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