Topic: The attraction is mutual... | |
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We’re awake to our charm
pulsating through us the more we talk lights come on to disarm the attraction is mutual and caution slows our greeting, par usual whether in step or out of reach there’s no boundaries we can’t breach as excitement stirs us feelings break free and nothing else matters except our being complete close by or far away we’re definitely in tune with each other’s psyche with our biology our biography our geography and our level of insanity who will be the first to take us by surprise lay down the disguise open all our eyes tighten existing ties dispel any white lies quiet each mournful cry by admitting our love before it dissipates and we say GOODBYE ©AthenaRose 02/18/13 |
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After some time a couple reads each others thoughts.
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Oooooh...Have you nmet someone..?..
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After some time a couple reads each others thoughts. how right you are, Jeff... and can finish each others sentences too |
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Oooooh...Have you nmet someone..?.. hi Ainjel, good to see you... I wrote this thinking about everyone here on Mingle and how we get on with each other... so no, unfortunately this wasn't written about me and my someone special... |
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I agree with you,Athena... Our hearts comunicate love when we re close or far away...
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Nice write...
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I loved this Athena
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I agree with you,Athena... Our hearts comunicate love when we re close or far away... |
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Nice write... thank you... |
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I loved this Athena thank you bunches... |
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We’re awake to our charm pulsating through us the more we talk lights come on to disarm the attraction is mutual and caution slows our greeting, par usual whether in step or out of reach there’s no boundaries we can’t breach as excitement stirs us feelings break free and nothing else matters except our being complete close by or far away we’re definitely in tune with each other’s psyche with our biology our biography our geography and our level of insanity who will be the first to take us by surprise lay down the disguise open all our eyes tighten existing ties dispel any white lies quiet each mournful cry by admitting our love before it dissipates and we say GOODBYE ©AthenaRose 02/18/13 As you must know I am a true fan of your art and this one is no different. Brilliant poem |
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We’re awake to our charm pulsating through us the more we talk lights come on to disarm the attraction is mutual and caution slows our greeting, par usual whether in step or out of reach there’s no boundaries we can’t breach as excitement stirs us feelings break free and nothing else matters except our being complete close by or far away we’re definitely in tune with each other’s psyche with our biology our biography our geography and our level of insanity who will be the first to take us by surprise lay down the disguise open all our eyes tighten existing ties dispel any white lies quiet each mournful cry by admitting our love before it dissipates and we say GOODBYE ©AthenaRose 02/18/13 As you must know I am a true fan of your art and this one is no different. Brilliant poem thank you, my friend... |
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Athena, that's really very pretty. Well written! Yep, this was a nice read.
tommy boy === |
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Athena, that's really very pretty. Well written! Yep, this was a nice read. tommy boy === thanks, tommy |
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nice lines
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nice lines hi mani... thank you for reading and responding to my work... glad you like it... |
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