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Topic: Paper hearts
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Tue 02/12/13 02:37 PM
Paper Hearts Easy to tear Holes within Walls are so Incredibly thin It is not bliss For a paper heart Makes you wish For love to start Wrenching your guts Aside in the rain Having a paper heart Can cause much pain Even if you get up Because you try You’re going to fall again You’re going to cry

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 02/12/13 03:20 PM
Paper Hearts Easy to tear Holes within Walls are so Incredibly thin It is not bliss For a paper heart Makes you wish For love to start Wrenching your guts Aside in the rain Having a paper heart Can cause much pain Even if you get up Because you try You’re going to fall again You’re going to cry This is sad Hippy!...

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Tue 02/12/13 03:30 PM
It's about frustration and heart ache of looking for love. At least, that's what I meant to write about.

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Tue 02/12/13 03:35 PM
love can be sad not all love is happy, i like it thou

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/13/13 05:32 AM
love can be sad not all love is happy, i like it thou Precisely, and the journey is tortuous.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 02/13/13 07:42 AM
Paper Hearts Easy to tear Holes within Walls are so Incredibly thin It is not bliss For a paper heart Makes you wish For love to start Wrenching your guts Aside in the rain Having a paper heart Can cause much pain Even if you get up Because you try You’re going to fall again You’re going to cry I like how you describe the fragility of the heart as being paper thin... that's awesome visionary skill in my book... and I like your poem a lot, hippie... although seeing you sad, well...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 02/13/13 08:16 AM
Very nice, I like it! Especially with all the knowing.... you get up and try again.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 02/13/13 08:20 AM
Nice write...

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/13/13 08:37 AM
athena: Thanks, I'm not really sad that I know of, I think? ted: cool. up2: thanks.

Solace84 Joined Mon 04/30/12 Posts: 322	Wed 02/13/13 09:12 AM
One thing about paper heart is that,it's torn many a times before it gets to a fella that knows its worth... Nice write,ok?

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/13/13 11:03 AM
thanks solace

Givemyheart2U Joined Sun 05/25/08 Posts: 56	Wed 02/13/13 12:53 PM
Paper Hearts Easy to tear Holes within Walls are so Incredibly thin It is not bliss For a paper heart Makes you wish For love to start Wrenching your guts Aside in the rain Having a paper heart Can cause much pain Even if you get up Because you try You’re going to fall again You’re going to cry I want to cry!! Nice write though

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 02/13/13 01:38 PM
Thank you givemyheart2u.

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