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Just be still
Be here in this moment In this place with me I've planned this Perfectly So you couldn't run, escape, flee from me If you pull away I'll draw you back to me If you fall asleep you'll still awaken to me When there's no where to run And no place to hide You'll have to let go And fall into me Rest on my chest Letting me caress The emotions You try So hard To suppress See I've planned this Ever so perfectly My plan is to teach you To simply be Whoever you are Its okay with me |
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There is nothing like just being...Nice write Tayah..
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I love this strategy... intellectual foreplay... totally awesome...
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Gently touching the hearts your hold...
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that was lovely so tender
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There is nothing like just being...Nice write Tayah.. I'm just starting to understand that. Its great |
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I like the feelings this evokes.
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* taya12, my friend, I've read your piece and find it alarmingly real and deeply moving. This, to me, sounds as if could be - being recited by probably every man loving woman across the globe. And to think, it's 'your' work. You put this together. You do truly require accolades. I extend my hand forward - to you. Peace, my warm friend.
And finally, I do truly hope to read much more of your poetry here within this cool, casual forum. For your flow as a wordsworth interests me. More, Baby! More! * Please be well and stay warm in winter, taya12, tommy boy === |
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always enjoy
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Awesome write... loved it!
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Very emotionally moving!!
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