Topic: Be
tayah12's photo
Fri 02/08/13 10:31 PM
Just be still
Be here in this moment
In this place with me
I've planned this
Perfectly
So you couldn't run, escape, flee from me
If you pull away I'll draw you back to me
If you fall asleep you'll still awaken to me
When there's no where to run
And no place to hide
You'll have to let go
And fall into me
Rest on my chest
Letting me caress
The emotions
You try
So hard
To suppress
See I've planned this
Ever so perfectly
My plan is to teach you
To simply be
Whoever you are
Its okay with me

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Sat 02/09/13 01:03 AM
There is nothing like just being...Nice write Tayah..

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Sat 02/09/13 01:47 AM
I love this strategy... intellectual foreplay... totally awesome... flowers

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Sat 02/09/13 04:16 AM
Gently touching the hearts your hold...:heart:

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Sat 02/09/13 03:13 PM
flowerforyou

woznotwoz's photo
Sat 02/09/13 03:29 PM
that was lovely so tender

tayah12's photo
Sat 02/09/13 03:38 PM

There is nothing like just being...Nice write Tayah..

I'm just starting to understand that. Its great glasses

DaySinner's photo
Sat 02/09/13 10:41 PM
I like the feelings this evokes. flowerforyou

tommyboy1101's photo
Sun 02/10/13 04:30 AM
* taya12, my friend, I've read your piece and find it alarmingly real and deeply moving. This, to me, sounds as if could be - being recited by probably every man loving woman across the globe. And to think, it's 'your' work. You put this together. You do truly require accolades. I extend my hand forward - to you. Peace, my warm friend.

And finally, I do truly hope to read much more of your poetry here within this cool, casual forum. For your flow as a wordsworth interests me. More, Baby! More!


* Please be well and stay warm in winter, taya12,

tommy boy

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s1owhand's photo
Sun 02/10/13 03:43 PM
always enjoy flowerforyou

Teditis's photo
Thu 02/14/13 06:25 AM
Awesome write... loved it!flowerforyou

Givemyheart2U's photo
Thu 02/14/13 07:25 AM
Very emotionally moving!! flowerforyou