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Topic: Lost and Found
Cascadex Joined Thu 01/31/13 Posts: 20	Fri 02/01/13 02:58 AM
Wandering Something...missing Searching with a spirit Carefree As a child running towards an ice cream truck Looking for the simple beauty Lost and found Inside anything Oblivious To all else Too naive to know All the weight and pain in the world Can rest on the few frayed strings Of an old bracelet *Snap*

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Fri 02/01/13 03:15 AM
really cool.. I hear the snap loud and clear... good write.. and welcome to the writer's forum..

Cascadex Joined Thu 01/31/13 Posts: 20	Fri 02/01/13 04:05 AM
really cool.. I hear the snap loud and clear... good write.. and welcome to the writer's forum.. Thanks I have a bunch of stuff lying around, maybe I will get to digging through it and posting some more

Zimzane2 Joined Mon 01/14/13 Posts: 221	Fri 02/01/13 05:18 AM


tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Fri 02/01/13 08:34 AM
Wow! Searching for simplicity and beauty the way a child sees the world. Great write.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/01/13 08:43 AM
Morning Cas ....I like your style..Especially this... Too naive to know All the weight and pain in the world Can rest on the few frayed strings Of an old bracelet Strong ending!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 02/01/13 09:15 AM
i like this

Cascadex Joined Thu 01/31/13 Posts: 20	Fri 02/01/13 11:09 AM
Thanks so much everyone, I feel like there is a really strong poetry community here. I have looked other places, and none seem to compare. Who would have guessed I would find it on a dating site

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