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Topic: ~ i'm not waiting
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 01/29/13 07:49 PM
im rebellious im in my bed ive made choices that require me to make more choices i gave up security so its said i say did i have it if i didnt feel it im rebellious im my own inception i wont always show on this paper im rebellious while i live my dreams intact for the rest i'll imagine,with you im rebellious im not waiting to love i am love im not waiting for love i give love im not waiting to love i am love

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 01/29/13 09:17 PM


AnonymousKing Joined Tue 01/29/13 Posts: 18	Tue 01/29/13 09:22 PM
i like it .

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 01/30/13 02:51 AM Edited by AthenaRose2 on Wed 01/30/13 02:52 AM
Excellent, TB... im not waiting to love i am love im not waiting for love i give love I'm rebellious too.. This I have in common with you...

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 01/30/13 04:33 AM
Love the rebellion...♥

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 01/30/13 04:55 AM


Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 06:03 AM
I believe it... that you're rebel and that you're not about to show your hand on paper. I would hope for a full-scale rebellion of love and peace of this nature, breakout across the world. Not trying to love... but being love. GL with that. Still, what's security? Maslow makes a lot of sense... but doesn't cover every aspect of life. I think that security isn't what you feel... it's what you trust about yerself. Know that you know, what you know. I think that you know a lot.

Sojourning_Soul Joined Fri 02/13/09 Posts: 10767	Wed 01/30/13 08:22 AM
Simplistic excellence! Sometimes more is not better. It can often confuse a simple clarity!

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 09:05 AM
Simplistic excellence! Sometimes more is not better. It can often confuse a simple clarity! Aye, guilty, me! haha. Digging deep into someone that I'd like to know better distracted me.

Sojourning_Soul Joined Fri 02/13/09 Posts: 10767	Wed 01/30/13 10:04 AM
Simplistic excellence! Sometimes more is not better. It can often confuse a simple clarity! Aye, guilty, me! haha. Digging deep into someone that I'd like to know better distracted me. My comment was on the piece itself, by no means directed elsewhere. Never apologize for words from within... no matter where your thoughts may be dwelling

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 01:16 PM
My comment was on the piece itself, by no means directed elsewhere. Never apologize for words from within... no matter where your thoughts may be dwelling TY... haha. But just to be clear.... my thoughts are are dwelling on a friendship that I hope to grow. That part, I may have confused with the "piece" itself... Your clarity reminded me of what we're here for. You folks write... I offer comments of me or whatever. I want it to remain so. Most all of you have my respect in crafting your magics... TB just happens to rock my thinking... kindred souls perhaps.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/30/13 04:19 PM
tazzops.. AnonymousKing...thankyou AthenaRose2...thankyou.kindly Ainjel...pleased you keep reading! oldhippie1952... Teditis...security..overrated...i prefer genuine,passion. Sojourning_Soul...i agree with simplicity,and more is not always,better. Teditis...diggin' in are you?..grin...and..dwelling....sometimes,you leave me the most charming words....i may be diggin' in....again a grin..im allowed....

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 05:25 PM
tazzops.. AnonymousKing...thankyou AthenaRose2...thankyou.kindly Ainjel...pleased you keep reading! oldhippie1952... Teditis...security..overrated...i prefer genuine,passion. Sojourning_Soul...i agree with simplicity,and more is not always,better. Teditis...diggin' in are you?..grin...and..dwelling....sometimes,you leave me the most charming words....i may be diggin' in....again a grin..im allowed.... You are very observant. (Is there a I tip my hat to you emoticon?) Yeah, diggin' in, me. Dwelling, always. No sweetheart... we are not allowed this... we simply choose it. After all, what does that get us? My passion is always genuine... my passion for you and your writing is very sincere. Never-the-less... simplicity is road that we'll take.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/30/13 06:18 PM
never-the-less i see poetry in you for me

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 06:21 PM
Write it then... I'll be your muse. Be gentle though...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/30/13 06:22 PM
darling.though that is also true... i meant it in a different way

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 06:37 PM
tell me how?

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/30/13 06:39 PM
i..being me.... see...... in you.... poetry.... you have.. in you... for me.... (ummm...not in the last little bit...laughing..)

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 06:48 PM
You are a treasure. You can write that poetry... me, not so well. Still... you are all that comes with the craft. Rhyme and reason... nuance and hidden agenda. Clearly spoken and something never said at all. I'll wait and watch... that's my craft.