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Topic: lazy laughter
tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Tue 01/29/13 05:18 PM
A pair of comfy Sweat pants kissing my hips A faded black hoodie Keeping out the cold My hair pulled back No make up on Me at my most basic No guard up You broke that fast You fit in nicely With my mood today Creating a comfy Lazy laughter day

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Tue 01/29/13 05:47 PM
No guard up... Sounds like a good day! Nice write

gentleman771 Joined Tue 12/18/12 Posts: 15	Tue 01/29/13 06:20 PM
keeping in the cold, is the lazy laughter

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 01/30/13 02:38 AM
A pair of comfy Sweat pants kissing my hips A faded black hoodie Keeping out the cold My hair pulled back No make up on Me at my most basic No guard up You broke that fast You fit in nicely With my mood today Creating a comfy Lazy laughter day aaahh, tayah, I can already feel the comfort of laughter in your style too... laid back and cool... nice write...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 01/30/13 01:14 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 01/30/13 01:18 PM
short & sweet....nicely done.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Wed 01/30/13 09:13 PM
I love the "sound" of this one Tay!

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