Topic: The coldness
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Tue 10/17/06 03:53 PM
Coming out of the coldness of my world
The cell underneath,and all for a girl
The sencelessness and wonder now left behind
Ive come back to take whats rightfully mine
The demons from below grant me my last deed
A contract was forged...my soul gone to bleed
but with this agreement my no longer friend
the world i arise....my death i avenge



i wrote this when i was a kid/it was for an english project in junior
high/it didnt get rave reviews,but it got me free daily meetings with
the on grounds therapist.

Jimi366's photo
Tue 10/17/06 05:09 PM
lmao I can imagine you at those meetings with the therapist
and thinking how full of shit they were. I went to a therapist
for awhile and when I realized I was providing my own therapy
I stopped. I think what you wrote is cool.
Jim

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Tue 10/17/06 10:41 PM
I'll prove myself worthy
your chains i'll break
death is avenged through the love I'll take
Your heart will melt as it breaks free
from the iceberg and flees unto me
I'll give you comfort, I'll give you warmth
the demons of death will seek you no more