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Topic: The Water
goldenhinde's photo
Mon 01/28/13 09:56 PM
I got the good news

Mixed in with bad

I got the good news

And I am the winner

And I cannot tell


I got the good news

And I am chosen to fill the

Gap

And I am glad

I Am calm


My place is

A place

I have a spot

I have a slot

I have made a stain


I am a sharpie

I have made a mark

No space ships needed

Only space

I am in my place


Welcome mat

Clean and welcome

Hand on the door knob

ready to open

I am here.

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Mon 01/28/13 11:45 PM
awesome... this is cool.. love the intrigue... flowerforyou
kc0003's photo
Tue 01/29/13 01:24 PM
flowerforyou
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Tue 01/29/13 01:26 PM
drinker flowers
Teditis's photo
Tue 01/29/13 01:36 PM
That's a lovely write.flowerforyou

I so want to know what happens when you open the door,
but thank you for taking me up to it.
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Tue 01/29/13 01:59 PM
You are a winner!...Enjoyed this Golden...flowerforyou
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Tue 01/29/13 06:13 PM
love the flow of this, very nice golden :)

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