Topic: ~Dreams Fantasy~
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Tue 10/17/06 03:17 PM
I feel him slip into my bed
Softly kissing me upon my head
Tracing my body with his fingertips
I cannot see his face
I can feel his breath upon my neck
He whispers in my ear
It is you.......

Blindfolded and bound
You render me helpless
Tearing the clothes from my body
Gasping at the sight of my nakedness
Moaning with animalistic pleasure
Kissing my neck
Tracing your way down my throat with your tongue
Grabbing my breasts
Fondling and carresing
Kissing and licking
Writhing and thrusting
You enter me
Hard as steel
Hot as lava
Grunting and growling
Panting and screaming
Throbbing and pounding
Your gutteral cry of release
Hot seed flooding me
You whisper your name in my ear

Shuddering and sobbing
I awake and wipe away my tears
Only a dream....
With a sigh I arise
Remembering your passion
Craving your touch
Aching for you
Desiring you
Looking for you.....

hosstin18's photo
Tue 10/17/06 03:27 PM
the best on yet poet true love will come to you dont worry it will

spay's photo
Tue 10/17/06 03:29 PM
WOW THAT POEM IS REALLY GOOD

Jimi366's photo
Tue 10/17/06 05:12 PM
You had me there!
You wrote an erotic poem but with a twist.
You painted this picture of lovemaking
and then surprised us with the fact that
it was all a dream.
That is great writing!