Topic: Life from a box
pennyg281's photo
Wed 01/23/13 06:50 PM

Flown in

Charter plane

Just for them

White Box

Red Tape

Bold Black Writing

LEFT KIDNEY

Someone Awaits

For Life From A Box

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Wed 01/23/13 06:54 PM
flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: flowers

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Wed 01/23/13 07:20 PM
Very nice ... very, very nice.

Poetry should always be simple, and yet descriptive, so that all can understand it -- or at least take from it something they can understand. You've very eloquently put something so common into a brief synopsis that is easy to understand. I applaud you for that!

Take care.

Queene123's photo
Wed 01/23/13 08:28 PM


Flown in

Charter plane

Just for them

White Box

Red Tape

Bold Black Writing

LEFT KIDNEY

Someone Awaits

For Life From A Box




adding to your poem



life from a box
as you can say
there are treasures
all away around
as one leaves
there mark
the memories
i shall say
tend to get stronger
as you leave a mark
of beauty for a kidney
yet to be granted
for one i can truly say
is a victim for there life
is in our creator hand
as we sense the smell
of the beauty of flowers
all around
as we say our life
is strong not weak
do to the health issue
one tends to have

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Wed 01/23/13 08:37 PM
A keeper!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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Thu 01/24/13 01:56 AM


Flown in

Charter plane

Just for them

White Box

Red Tape

Bold Black Writing

LEFT KIDNEY

Someone Awaits

For Life From A Box


the gift of life to be opened on arrival...
love your write penny... :heart: :heart:

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Thu 01/24/13 12:38 PM


Well...said. flowerforyou