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Flown in Charter plane Just for them White Box Red Tape Bold Black Writing LEFT KIDNEY Someone Awaits For Life From A Box |
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Very nice ... very, very nice.
Poetry should always be simple, and yet descriptive, so that all can understand it -- or at least take from it something they can understand. You've very eloquently put something so common into a brief synopsis that is easy to understand. I applaud you for that! Take care. |
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Flown in Charter plane Just for them White Box Red Tape Bold Black Writing LEFT KIDNEY Someone Awaits For Life From A Box adding to your poem life from a box as you can say there are treasures all away around as one leaves there mark the memories i shall say tend to get stronger as you leave a mark of beauty for a kidney yet to be granted for one i can truly say is a victim for there life is in our creator hand as we sense the smell of the beauty of flowers all around as we say our life is strong not weak do to the health issue one tends to have |
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A keeper!
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Flown in Charter plane Just for them White Box Red Tape Bold Black Writing LEFT KIDNEY Someone Awaits For Life From A Box the gift of life to be opened on arrival... love your write penny... |
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Well...said. |
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