Topic: Falling deeply in to you...
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Sun 01/13/13 05:02 AM
I wish
I could feel life
thru your eyes
that I could be it
without all the disguise
the height and depth
the vast majesty
what a reflection
would it reveal to me
in what form
would I find ecstasy
a thought
or a feeling be
what if you stood next to me
the air
its space
could I still breathe
clinging to your mastery
where positive and negative dwell
what future would the past foretell
seeking freedom
denying self
true love is the only common wealth
in tune to natures rhythms
and blues
physically rising and falling deeply
so deeply into you
such mystery surrounds our equal fate
we thrive and strive toward heaven’s gate
together
yet alone it aches
my heart
the touch of you creates
a longing in me
in the moment of balance we…
will its fusion reach infinity
of this I seek

:heart©AthenaRose01/12/13:heart:


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Sun 01/13/13 05:47 PM
Souls embrace
Very nice Ms Athena !

flowerforyou

bluffmaster7171's photo
Sun 01/13/13 05:54 PM
A really good one

mig25's photo
Sun 01/13/13 11:15 PM

I wish
I could feel life
thru your eyes
that I could be it
without all the disguise
the height and depth
the vast majesty
what a reflection
would it reveal to me
in what form
would I find ecstasy
a thought
or a feeling be
what if you stood next to me
the air
its space
could I still breathe
clinging to your mastery
where positive and negative dwell
what future would the past foretell
seeking freedom
denying self
true love is the only common wealth
in tune to natures rhythms
and blues
physically rising and falling deeply
so deeply into you
such mystery surrounds our equal fate
we thrive and strive toward heaven’s gate
together
yet alone it aches
my heart
the touch of you creates
a longing in me
in the moment of balance we…
will its fusion reach infinity
of this I seek

:heart©AthenaRose01/12/13:heart:




Athena . . . yes, you've done it again. Nice one!!!

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Mon 01/14/13 12:11 AM

Souls embrace
Very nice Ms Athena !

flowerforyou


Hi Kik... thanks... flowerforyou

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Mon 01/14/13 12:12 AM

A really good one


Hi bluffmaster... welcome to the writer's forum... thanks for reading and commenting... flowerforyou

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Mon 01/14/13 12:16 AM


I wish
I could feel life
thru your eyes
that I could be it
without all the disguise
the height and depth
the vast majesty
what a reflection
would it reveal to me
in what form
would I find ecstasy
a thought
or a feeling be
what if you stood next to me
the air
its space
could I still breathe
clinging to your mastery
where positive and negative dwell
what future would the past foretell
seeking freedom
denying self
true love is the only common wealth
in tune to natures rhythms
and blues
physically rising and falling deeply
so deeply into you
such mystery surrounds our equal fate
we thrive and strive toward heaven’s gate
together
yet alone it aches
my heart
the touch of you creates
a longing in me
in the moment of balance we…
will its fusion reach infinity
of this I seek

:heart©AthenaRose01/12/13:heart:




Athena . . . yes, you've done it again. Nice one!!!


Hi mig... yea, I had a rare moment with this one..I'de like to change my style... hopefully I can pull more of this type out of me... thanks for commenting.. flowerforyou:heart:flowerforyou