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Topic: --- A killer inside ---
WithOrWithoutYou Joined Thu 10/18/12 Posts: 255	Thu 12/27/12 12:08 AM
There's this woman that seduces me Every day I feel comfort, she gives me release I feel safety in her arms Six or seven gives me relief I sleep soundly as a baby It's really no harm She wakes me for work Never sounds the alarm She kills me everyday But it's okay don't you see I need it like I needed you It's now a part of me

WithOrWithoutYou Joined Thu 10/18/12 Posts: 255	Thu 12/27/12 12:37 AM Edited by WithOrWithoutYou on Thu 12/27/12 12:43 AM
In case you think I'm one of those weirdos that wants to shoot up a mall or elementary school, you're wrong. My thread/poem was about addiction and in my case, alcohol is the killer inside

Xotic_Blue_Eyes Joined Sun 12/16/12 Posts: 86	Thu 12/27/12 03:03 AM
I read the last 2 that you have created. To write down what's on your mind, be it great or less then , is honorable. And who is to be the better judge, to each his own. :-)

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 12/27/12 03:43 AM
I do see...Not me, but too many I loved and still love..It's a difficult process to watch, your words capture it well!

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Thu 12/27/12 04:47 PM
I like the way you relate the alcohol as being a She..

WithOrWithoutYou Joined Thu 10/18/12 Posts: 255	Thu 12/27/12 09:35 PM
I read the last 2 that you have created. To write down what's on your mind, be it great or less then , is honorable. And who is to be the better judge, to each his own. :-) Yea, I'm not Shakespeare. I'm no poet and I know it. I'm a musician and would like to dabble a bit in songwriting. My writings on here aren't songworthy but it helps to get the creative juices flowing, yanno?

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