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Topic: --- My Mathematical Mind ---
WithOrWithoutYou Joined Thu 10/18/12 Posts: 255	Wed 12/26/12 10:48 PM Edited by WithOrWithoutYou on Wed 12/26/12 11:19 PM
Added up in my mind It made sense One plus one equals two You and I equal one I deluded myself into thinking These numbers were constant I couldn't keep up with your math All these variables now between us You wouldn't meet me at the median Now an X in my equation I can't seem to solve the problem That you and I have made

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 12/26/12 10:59 PM
Nice write...

shapirobo Joined Mon 12/24/12 Posts: 202	Wed 12/26/12 11:10 PM
Added up in my mind It made sense One plus one equals two You and I equal one I deluded myself into thinking These numbers were constant I couldn't keep up with your math All these variables now between us You couldn't meet me at the median Now an X in my equation I can't seem to solve the problem That you and I have made all I can say is, 'WOW!!!'

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Thu 12/27/12 12:21 AM
Added up in my mind It made sense One plus one equals two You and I equal one I deluded myself into thinking These numbers were constant I couldn't keep up with your math All these variables now between us You wouldn't meet me at the median Now an X in my equation I can't seem to solve the problem That you and I have made Hi WoWY, I haven't seen you on the poetry threads yet.. so welcome aboard... I like how you describe the intricate symmetry between two lives as they come together and drift apart... excellent write ..

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Thu 12/27/12 01:24 AM
nice write welcome to mingle.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 12/27/12 03:52 AM
Yep, it's a wow for me too!!!

WithOrWithoutYou Joined Thu 10/18/12 Posts: 255	Thu 12/27/12 09:44 PM
Added up in my mind It made sense One plus one equals two You and I equal one I deluded myself into thinking These numbers were constant I couldn't keep up with your math All these variables now between us You wouldn't meet me at the median Now an X in my equation I can't seem to solve the problem That you and I have made Hi WoWY, I haven't seen you on the poetry threads yet.. so welcome aboard... I like how you describe the intricate symmetry between two lives as they come together and drift apart... excellent write .. Thanks AthenaRose2. I can't say I have much experience in writing but once in a while something comes out of me that others may get something out of and appreciate.

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