Topic: --- My Mathematical Mind ---
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Wed 12/26/12 10:48 PM
Edited by WithOrWithoutYou on Wed 12/26/12 11:19 PM
Added up in my mind
It made sense
One plus one equals two
You and I equal one

I deluded myself into thinking
These numbers were constant
I couldn't keep up with your math
All these variables now between us

You wouldn't meet me at the median
Now an X in my equation
I can't seem to solve the problem
That you and I have made


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Wed 12/26/12 10:59 PM
Nice write...smokin

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Wed 12/26/12 11:10 PM

Added up in my mind
It made sense
One plus one equals two
You and I equal one

I deluded myself into thinking
These numbers were constant
I couldn't keep up with your math
All these variables now between us

You couldn't meet me at the median
Now an X in my equation
I can't seem to solve the problem
That you and I have made



all I can say is, 'WOW!!!'

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Thu 12/27/12 12:21 AM

Added up in my mind
It made sense
One plus one equals two
You and I equal one

I deluded myself into thinking
These numbers were constant
I couldn't keep up with your math
All these variables now between us

You wouldn't meet me at the median
Now an X in my equation
I can't seem to solve the problem
That you and I have made


Hi WoWY, I haven't seen you on the poetry threads yet.. so welcome aboard... I like how you describe the intricate symmetry between two lives as they come together and drift apart... excellent write .. flowerforyou

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Thu 12/27/12 01:24 AM
flowerforyou
nice write welcome to mingle.

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Thu 12/27/12 03:52 AM
Yep, it's a wow for me too!!!flowerforyou

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Thu 12/27/12 09:44 PM


Added up in my mind
It made sense
One plus one equals two
You and I equal one

I deluded myself into thinking
These numbers were constant
I couldn't keep up with your math
All these variables now between us

You wouldn't meet me at the median
Now an X in my equation
I can't seem to solve the problem
That you and I have made


Hi WoWY, I haven't seen you on the poetry threads yet.. so welcome aboard... I like how you describe the intricate symmetry between two lives as they come together and drift apart... excellent write .. flowerforyou


Thanks AthenaRose2. I can't say I have much experience in writing but once in a while something comes out of me that others may get something out of and appreciate. flowerforyou