so you still continue to watch me
with subtle control you try to disguise
my emotions are now your plaything
and I see “bitter lust” in your eyes
as you try to “crush” me beneath you
with your cold hand on my mouth
you stare wickedly into my soul
and grow more determined somehow
the moments do already pass us
our chances we take in vain
with anticipation we started
but now all we feel is pain
your words they won my heart
and I wanted you then, no doubt
but you carry around a burden
that you refuse to even spell out
we will never vie with memories
only starting over, that’s it, anew
so, will we try us again?
do you want me to be with you?
I won’t wait here forever
my patience is wearing bone thin
it has to be now that you tell me
or I swear, we will never be again!

Copyright©AthenaRose 12/17/12

Great poem!!! Very in depth and intriguing as usual!!! Awesome work!!!

Good stuff again wow you have a talent

Fantastic to marry those letters to my eyes,mind and day.

...♥...

Athena Athena Athena . . . what can I say. another great poem from a very talent poet.

MizLopez... as always your words are very welcome...

BestinShow... thank you for your input too... your words make me grin...

JBradson... hello.. nice to meet you.. and welcome to the writers forum.. "Fantastic to marry those letters to my eyes,mind and day." I'm a bit in wonderment by your comment... for it to be your first post... it's very lovely... though I think hardly deserving.. thank you for showing your interest in my work...

tazzops... nice to see you again, my friend...

ainjel... thank you...

mig... you're way too kind... I'm not sure how much talent it takes to vent one's pent up emotions in rhyme...