Topic: Never Ending Touch
Salgra5's photo
Thu 12/06/12 11:58 PM
Did anyone ever have an eye to see the truth
totally unaware of the commotion
whispers in the balcony
that disregard any melody
spill my soul with bloods never ending span
and touch the tenderness of its flow
just let it be
forever
leaving me to drown
leaving me to fall
embraced
untathered
by moderation
please ....
consume me

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Fri 12/07/12 01:54 AM
Salgra... I love the way you allow the voices in your head to take over, drowning everything else out to express the deepest parts of you.. wow, love your read...flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Fri 12/07/12 02:03 AM

Did anyone ever have an eye to see the truth
totally unaware of the commotion
whispers in the balcony
that disregard any melody
spill my soul with bloods never ending span
and touch the tenderness of its flow
just let it be
forever
leaving me to drown
leaving me to fall
embraced
untathered
by moderation
please ....
consume me


Ah Salgra5, what an emotional read. I like it and welcome

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Fri 12/07/12 04:56 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Fri 12/07/12 06:48 AM
Yes, I totally agreeflowerforyou ...I like this one even more than "Flowers" though both are great!:smile:

Salgra5's photo
Fri 12/07/12 06:14 PM
flowerforyou Tnx y'all