Topic: MOTHER NATURE
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Thu 12/06/12 11:41 PM
Strolling the downhill road ,
a strong wind bolstered my spirits so bored,

The sunflowers tossed their heads around,
natures music indeed a sweet sound.

Injected was i with a vial of euphoria and a sense of gratitude,
her valium seemed to rob me of my attitude.

Heard a voice behind me, did i ,the tossing head mumbled,
"with your fragrance i fill your space "

Not to be left behind the reply came through ,
"You surely are fragrant , but who takes your pollen from place to place".

In their own worlds they carried in harmony oblivious to my human presence,

It dawned unto me that mother nature has yet to teach us many lessions.

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Fri 12/07/12 02:05 AM
First of all welcome and next, I like this and look forward to reading more of your work.

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Fri 12/07/12 02:06 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Fri 12/07/12 02:06 AM
Welcome to the creative writing forum, freud, I love your nicname.. and I equally enjoyed my discernment in your words.. that mystical powers can transform us as it flows outward to touch our spirits... very nice..flowerforyou

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Fri 12/07/12 03:22 AM
thankyou very much . your reviews mean a lot to me . and about my nickname i want to be a psychiatrist . hence the name freud

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Fri 12/07/12 03:47 AM
I thought there might be deeper meaning behind it, especially when I studied your work, and I hope you'll be able to become all that you want to be.. helping others is a worthy pursuit.. flowerforyou

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Fri 12/07/12 08:38 PM
i like this poem in how it points to the kind of high you can get from nature. Welcome!

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Sat 12/08/12 12:38 AM
thank you for your wishes.

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Sat 12/08/12 12:39 AM
thanks a lot .