Topic: Addiction
DaySinner's photo
Thu 12/06/12 11:03 PM
Edited by DaySinner on Thu 12/06/12 11:14 PM
i don't deserve
but still i dream
of touching your hair
and where I might dare

to breath in your essence
feel your soft skin
overtaking your nature
you take me in

torn and confused
my mind is fused
what is wrong is right
i know we might lose

i squeeze a pillow
and pretend it's you
and ask how it is that
i will get through

as i read your words
i hold on tight
like drug withdrawal
inside i fight

i need you now
but I don't know how
painted into a corner
what will hearts allow?

if you were only here
there would be no sorrow
for this night we might
steal from tomorrow

no photo
Thu 12/06/12 11:12 PM
You have become very adept at expressing your heart tones.. Sinner, "torn and confused my mind is fused what is wrong is right i know we might lose"... love's sweet battle is worth the warfare, when you can just as easily win, too. Your write is very touching. flowerforyou

pennyg281's photo
Thu 12/06/12 11:33 PM
Very Nice I enjoyed thisflowerforyou

mig25's photo
Fri 12/07/12 02:06 AM

i don't deserve
but still i dream
of touching your hair
and where I might dare

to breath in your essence
feel your soft skin
overtaking your nature
you take me in

torn and confused
my mind is fused
what is wrong is right
i know we might lose

i squeeze a pillow
and pretend it's you
and ask how it is that
i will get through

as i read your words
i hold on tight
like drug withdrawal
inside i fight

i need you now
but I don't know how
painted into a corner
what will hearts allow?

if you were only here
there would be no sorrow
for this night we might
steal from tomorrow


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DaySinner's photo
Fri 12/07/12 02:07 AM
thank you Athena and Penny! flowerforyou

DaySinner's photo
Fri 12/07/12 02:07 AM
thank you mig25!

no photo
Fri 12/07/12 02:08 AM
with much love, my dear sinner..:heart: flowerforyou :heart: