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Edited by
AthenaRose2
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Thu 12/06/12 03:08 PM
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![]() ![]() I see them like a viewfinder in my head I feel you gripped tight around my chest My stomach is nauseous as I try to speak I’m frustrated how you make me feel so weak Is this love that portends me to think I might die? It is madness when all I can do freely is thirst and cry My soul craves your touch so much you brought me luck Since you’ve been gone I’ve realized on you I’m hung up I try to forget how you make me smile with your eyes From my heart teaching me to reach for the sky You appeared with confidence on your face Reflecting pools of light a heart of grace Showing me what it means to be a friend Our lives go on now but to what end? ![]() ![]() Copyright © Athena Rose 12/06/12 |
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"I try to forget how you make me smile with your eyes ",
oh how i've been there too, very nice write athenarose! |
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Thank you, bastet.. the eyes truly are the window to the soul..
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![]() Lovely write |
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Hi penny...
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Edited by
DaySinner
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Thu 12/06/12 10:08 PM
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it is very beautiful
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Thank you, Sinner..
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Yep I'm inspired to continue to write . . . Athena thanks
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I love your spirit, mig.. and your ability to express it..
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ho cutie.. thanks for the thoughtful gesture..
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I enjoyed your poem Athena
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thank you, cutie..
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hi, Jeff, thank you...
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