Topic: I Don't Know How To Get The Words Out
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Thu 12/06/12 03:04 PM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Thu 12/06/12 03:08 PM
:heart: I don’t know how to get the words out! :heart:

I see them like a viewfinder in my head
I feel you gripped tight around my chest
My stomach is nauseous as I try to speak
I’m frustrated how you make me feel so weak
Is this love that portends me to think I might die?
It is madness when all I can do freely is thirst and cry
My soul craves your touch so much you brought me luck
Since you’ve been gone I’ve realized on you I’m hung up
I try to forget how you make me smile with your eyes
From my heart teaching me to reach for the sky
You appeared with confidence on your face
Reflecting pools of light a heart of grace
Showing me what it means to be a friend
Our lives go on now but to what end?

:heart: I don’t know how to get the words out! :heart:


Copyright © Athena Rose 12/06/12

bastet126's photo
Thu 12/06/12 04:10 PM
"I try to forget how you make me smile with your eyes ",
oh how i've been there too,
very nice write athenarose!

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Thu 12/06/12 09:26 PM
Thank you, bastet.. the eyes truly are the window to the soul.. flowerforyou

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Thu 12/06/12 09:52 PM
flowerforyou
Lovely write

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Thu 12/06/12 09:59 PM
Hi penny... :smile: thankx...

DaySinner's photo
Thu 12/06/12 10:02 PM
Edited by DaySinner on Thu 12/06/12 10:08 PM
it is very beautiful :heart:

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Thu 12/06/12 11:06 PM
Thank you, Sinner.. :heart: :heart:

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Fri 12/07/12 02:09 AM
Yep I'm inspired to continue to write . . . Athena thanks

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Fri 12/07/12 03:42 AM
I love your spirit, mig.. and your ability to express it.. flowerforyou

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Fri 12/07/12 03:46 AM
flowerforyou

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Fri 12/07/12 03:49 AM
ho cutie.. thanks for the thoughtful gesture.. :smile:

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Fri 12/07/12 03:56 AM
I enjoyed your poem Athenaflowerforyou

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Fri 12/07/12 03:59 AM
thank you, cutie.. flowerforyou

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Fri 12/07/12 04:58 AM
flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Fri 12/07/12 06:45 AM
hi, Jeff, thank you... :smile: